帮我评价下我写的英语作文准备考博用的,大家看看,批评指正,谢谢!评价地详细的再加10到20分不等. Open Mind Open mind generally means positive and creative thoughts. Sometimes we might come into such case that a

帮我评价下我写的英语作文准备考博用的,大家看看,批评指正,谢谢!评价地详细的再加10到20分不等. Open Mind Open mind generally means positive and creative thoughts. Sometimes we might come into such case that a
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Open Mind
Open mind generally means positive and creative thoughts. Sometimes we might come into such case that a tough problem difficult to solve in a certain method can be easily setteled in another, but all too often, we do almost everything in our traditional ways rather than serch for any alternatives and at last only to find we have missed many opportunities. From the above case we can have a visible idea of what and how important open mind is.
Open mind can bring us a lot benefits. In the first place, open mind keeps our thoughts positive. As we have now entered information age, we can help ourselves keeping up with the times with an open mind by updating our knowledge structure with the aid of various data sources from books to newspapers and from television to internet. In the second place, open mind keeps our thoughts creative. When our mind keeps open, the traditonal ideals,behaviours as well as rules are likely to be questioned for their reasonableness and therefore we can dispose of those that restrain our development, and furthermore, explore more unknown fields and make more innovations.
Of course, recognizing the importance of open mind is only the first step to success and we have to put it into practice in our daliy activities as well. Take an example, for students ,they should learn more and think for themselves instead of merely holding what their teachers tell them, while for scientists, it is necessary for them to try new models and techniques rather than just follow the convention they are familiar with.
In short, remember to keep your mind open, catch as many opportunities as possible if you want to achieve greater success.
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帮我评价下我写的英语作文准备考博用的,大家看看,批评指正,谢谢!评价地详细的再加10到20分不等. Open Mind Open mind generally means positive and creative thoughts. Sometimes we might come into such case that a
line 2 "case"--cases
"difficult to slove"-- is difficult to solve
line 5 "visible"--clear
line 7 "infomation age" --age of computer technology
line 8"times"- time
line 10 "When our mind keeps open"--when we keep our minds open
" When our mind keeps open,the traditonal ideals,behaviours as well as rules are likely to be questioned for their reasonableness and therefore we can dispose of those that restrain our development,and furthermore,explore more unknown fields and make more innovations."--problem in sentence structure

Open mind can bring us a lot of benefits.
First of all, many grammatical mistakes that you have made.
Some spelling mistakes and lack of creative viewpoint as well.
It seems that you are a junior secondary student.

nothing is impossible in the world ,only need you if you can set your mind to do it ! only the pursuit of progress can be life 's ture goal ! if you spend all your life in the pursuit , then you can experiences many great moments in your life !

It's so so!

语言不够地道。
Open mind can be defined as thoughts that are positive and creative. In some cases we find that a problem, which most believe is difficult, can be easily settled in an creative way. We are...

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语言不够地道。
Open mind can be defined as thoughts that are positive and creative. In some cases we find that a problem, which most believe is difficult, can be easily settled in an creative way. We are accustomed to doing things "right" and do not feel like seeking alternatives which may be much more effective and productive. That, in reality, has brought about a huge "loss" of opportunities. In this regard, it might be a fault to overlook issues related to open mind.

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