谁能帮我改改这篇英文信,因该有很多错If you recive my little,It's fortunate,because you didn't leave me your class number ,You just gave me your gamertag for PS3 ,but I don't have a PS3,I just have a PSP,besides I seldom play video gam

谁能帮我改改这篇英文信,因该有很多错If you recive my little,It's fortunate,because you didn't leave me your class number ,You just gave me your gamertag for PS3 ,but I don't have a PS3,I just have a PSP,besides I seldom play video gam
谁能帮我改改这篇英文信,因该有很多错
If you recive my little,It's fortunate,because you didn't leave me your class number ,You just gave me your gamertag for PS3 ,but I don't have a PS3,I just have a PSP,besides I seldom play video games.
Next year ,I will enter a college ,so this year,I will be very busy,I have to study hard,I always hard working,but It's hard for me to make some improving.Sometimes I blame myself I'm useless.Do you trouble with your studying?
In my spare time ,I'd like to do some reading,I enjoy reading my magazine which about scince ,and I also read some essay.My composition is not very outstanding,so I want to improve it by reading.Do you like scince?I sometimes watch "Descovery"and"National Geograpy"and I dream to be a scintest.Tell me what you want to do in the fulture.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.my e-mail is

谁能帮我改改这篇英文信,因该有很多错If you recive my little,It's fortunate,because you didn't leave me your class number ,You just gave me your gamertag for PS3 ,but I don't have a PS3,I just have a PSP,besides I seldom play video gam
首先 中文就有问题 “应该”而不是“因该”- -
第一段
little?是letter吧
class number 一班没有这样用的
此外,这一段表达的意思不明,有些不知所云.
第二段
make some improving 应该是 make progress
I blame myself I'm useless 这句话表达有问题
Do you trouble with 应该是 do you have trouble with
这一段意思表达的较明确.
第三段
my magazine 应该是 the magazine
essay 应该是复数
I sometimes watch "Descovery"and"National Geograpy" 是on tv 吧
根据我的理解和最大限度的对你用词的保留,修改文如下：
It's fortunate that you receive my letter because you did not tell me which class you are from.
Thanks for giving me your gamertag.But it is only for PS3 which I do not have; I only have a PSP.Moreover, I seldom play video games.So I don't think its useful to me.
I will enter a college next year.This year,I will be very busy syudying to prepare the exams.There is a problem that I always hard working but make little progress. Sometimes I think I am useless and even blame myself very often. Do you have trouble with your studies?
In my spare time ,I'd like to do some reading.My writing skills are not very outstanding,so I want to improve by reading.I enjoy reading magazines and essays about science.Do you like scince? I sometimes watch shows on science such as "Descovery"and"National Geograpy" on TV. Furthermore,I dream to be a scientist when I grow up. Please tell me what you want to do in the future.I'm looking forward to hearing from you.my e-mail is
差不多就这样...我英语水平也不高...O(∩_∩)O哈哈~