帮忙检查下这段话有啥语法上的错误.As is known to all,man and nature are good friend,which anyone who want to destroy their emotion must be to give retribution.In my opinion,firstly,we should know how using rules of nature at right.Seco

帮忙检查下这段话有啥语法上的错误.As is known to all,man and nature are good friend,which anyone who want to destroy their emotion must be to give retribution.In my opinion,firstly,we should know how using rules of nature at right.Seco
帮忙检查下这段话有啥语法上的错误.As is known to all,man and nature are good friend,which anyone who want to destroy their emotion must be to give retribution.In my opinion,firstly,we should know how using rules of nature at right.Secondly,defending environment and keeping ecological balance.Thirdly,live and defending animal or plant and keeping biodiversity.In a word,only man and nature harmony,our word would become more and more beautiful and human could live happier
Thirdly loving and defending animals our plants and keeping biodiversity which we all can do and so easy.

帮忙检查下这段话有啥语法上的错误.As is known to all,man and nature are good friend,which anyone who want to destroy their emotion must be to give retribution.In my opinion,firstly,we should know how using rules of nature at right.Seco
as is known to all,man and nature are good friends. anyone who wants to destory them must deserve something in return. in my opinion,firstly, we should know how to follow the rules of nature correctly. secondly, defending environment and keeping ecological balance are important. thirdly.in a word, man and nature need to keep hamonious so that our word will become more and more beautiful and human will live happier. 我不知道你说第三点在表达什么,用中文说呗

错的不是一点点啊，看不下去了

不会英语就别逞强了，做点啥不好。你这个文章问题很多，想提高怕是要很久了。

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As known to all,man and nature are good friends ，which anyone who wants to destroy their emotion must be to give retribution. In my opinion,firstly,we should know how to use rules of nature at right. Secondly,defending environment and keeping ecological balance. Thirdly,raising and defending animal or planting and keeping biodiversity. In a word,only man and nature in harmony,our world would become more and more beautiful and human could live a happier life
我不确定全对，但希望能帮到忙

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good friends who wants how to use