前辈们最好把原文复制下来,然后在有错的后面加括号注明错误类型并改正,最多改十处)My parents decided to make a trip to Beijing .When they told me their decisions ,I was so delighted .But my mother became worried with h

前辈们最好把原文复制下来,然后在有错的后面加括号注明错误类型并改正,最多改十处)My parents decided to make a trip to Beijing .When they told me their decisions ,I was so delighted .But my mother became worried with h
前辈们最好把原文复制下来,然后在有错的后面加括号注明错误类型并改正,最多改十处)
My parents decided to make a trip to Beijing .When they told me their decisions ,I was so delighted .But my mother became worried with her flower ,for nobody would take care of it .Seeing the worrying expression on her face ,suddenly I remembered that an article in a magazine I had read earlier .It's suggested in the article that people used a piece of cloth to take care of their plants when you are away .On the day we set off ,I found a piece of cloth and put one end of them into the basin ,which is full of water ,and the other end into the flower pot .Three days later ,while we came back from Beijing ,flower was still alive.前辈们请放心,鄙人和原文对了两遍(绝对用心地对),均未有发现哪抄错了,所以请前辈们大胆地改(最多改十处错误喔^_^) 越快越好,

前辈们最好把原文复制下来,然后在有错的后面加括号注明错误类型并改正,最多改十处)My parents decided to make a trip to Beijing .When they told me their decisions ,I was so delighted .But my mother became worried with h
make a trip 改为 take a trip
decisions 改为 decision
worried with 改为worried about
remembered that中that删除
people used改为people use
you are away改为they are away
one end of them 改为 one of it
which is改为which was
flower改为the flower

My parents decided to make a trip to Beijing。不用make 而用have .

My parents decided to make a trip to Beijing .When they told me their decisions ,I was so delighted . But my mother became worried ABOUT her flower ,for nobody would take care of it .Seeing the WORRIE...

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My parents decided to make a trip to Beijing .When they told me their decisions ,I was so delighted . But my mother became worried ABOUT her flower ,for nobody would take care of it .Seeing the WORRIED expression on her face , I WAS suddenly REMINDED OF an article in a magazine I had read earlier . It suggested in the article that people use a piece of cloth to take care of their plants when THEY are away . On the day we set off , I found a piece of cloth and put one end of IT into the basin , which WAS full of water , and the other end into the flower pot . Three days later ,WHEN we came back from Beijing , THE flower was still alive.

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